Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation-12: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you to Joey Salazar for the SECDIR review.

** Section 4.
   Clients MUST ignore any received Version Negotiation packets that
   contain the version that they initially attempted.

Shouldn’t this read “… that contain _any of the versions_  that they initially
attempted” since multiple versions may have been previously offered?

** Section 5.  Editorial.  The text defined “Fully-Deployed Versions” in this
section but uses it first in Section 4.