: Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Wed, 12 May 2021 15:11 UTC

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I reviewed manageability, and think this is mostly ready - with a few 
issues, to which I added:

Manageability: PMTU <https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/366>
#365 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Is dropping intended to be random? 
<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/365>
#365 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: does the endpoint change address using a NAPT? 
<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/364>
#364 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Not so trivial ACK detection for TCP 
<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/363>
#363 ( with suggestions)
Manageability: Detailed Review Comments - NiTs 
<https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/362>

#362 (mostly with suggestions)


The issues I raised in the first review appear now to have been 
resolved, many thanks,

Gorry

> On Thu, May 6, 2021, at 16:37, Martin Thomson wrote:
>> I just read through applicability and it's good.  I found a few errors,
>> but nothing truly shocking.  The editorial standard is pretty high.
>> I've submitted pull requests for those things I found.
>>
>> Starting on the other now.
>>
>> On Tue, Apr 27, 2021, at 04:09, Matt Joras wrote:
>>> Hello,
>>>
>>> The Ops drafts have already gone through one round of last call, where
>>> there was good feedback and engagement driving further changes. Since
>>> then we have new revisions to the drafts. It is the opinion of the
>>> editors and chairs that these are ready for another last call. Thus
>>> this email announces another Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for the
>>> following documents:
>>>
>>> * Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
>>>    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-manageability-11
>>> * Applicability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
>>>    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-applicability-11
>>>
>>> The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on 10 May 2021.
>>>
>>> Please review the documents above and open issues for your review
>>> comments in our repository at https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts.
>>> You may also send comments to quic@ietf.org.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> Lars, Lucas, Matt
>>> QUIC WG Chairs
>>>
>>>
>>