Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-quic-applicability-16: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 19 April 2022 22:21 UTC

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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-quic-applicability-16: Yes

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# Internet AD comments for {draft-ietf-quic-applicability-16}
CC @ekline

## Nits

### S2

* s/a application/an application/

### S3.2

* s/and to unacceptable/and unacceptable/, I think

### S4

* s/they are assigned Section 6/they are assigned; see Section 6/, perhaps

Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-quic-applicability… Erik Kline via Datatracker