AD review: draft-ietf-quic-applicability-13

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Wed, 24 November 2021 09:50 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: "quic@ietf.org" <quic@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-quic-applicability.authors@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-quic-applicability.authors@ietf.org>
Subject: AD review: draft-ietf-quic-applicability-13
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Hi all,

Now I have done my AD review of draft-ietf-quic-applicability-13.

Thanks for the well written document. It ticked all the boxes in my AD checklist except the Normative ref section (see -https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/407#issue-1062174642).

I have file some minor issues in the Github and should be very easy to resolve.

Issues:


  *   https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/402#issue-1062144409
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/404#issue-1062153952
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/405#issue-1062161408
  *   https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/406#issue-1062170125

Nits PR:

  *   https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/403#issue-1062148120 (this fails some checks ☹)

BR

Zahed