[radext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-radext-coa-proxy-05

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com> Tue, 07 August 2018 20:01 UTC

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Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Has Nits

As part of the Ops Directorate (opsdir) review, this document has some Nits and
is otherwise Ready.

https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-radext-coa-proxy-05.txt

The Downref was appropriate called out during last call, but the Abstract,
header, and disclaimers need fixing.

Thanks,

Carlos Pignataro.