Re: [radext] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-03

Dean cheng <dean.cheng@huawei.com> Thu, 23 April 2015 08:17 UTC

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From: Dean cheng <dean.cheng@huawei.com>
To: Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com>
Thread-Topic: [radext] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-03
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Alan - thanks for the review and catch. It is now fixed
in the 05 text:

http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-05

Cheers
Dean

> -----Original Message-----
> From: radext [mailto:radext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Alan DeKok
> Sent: Wednesday, April 22, 2015 12:30 PM
> To: Dean cheng
> Cc: radext@ietf.org; radext-chairs@tools.ietf.org; lionel.morand@orange.com
> Subject: Re: [radext] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-
> 03
> 
> On Apr 22, 2015, at 6:21 AM, Dean cheng <dean.cheng@huawei.com> wrote:
> > We've just posted the 04 text that addressed comments posted by Alan.
> > It is:
> >
> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-04
> 
>   On a quick scan, it looks good.  The only minor nit is the ASCII art.  You
> have a field ending at the end of a line, and then continuing on the next line:
> 
> 	... | Field-Name |
>       | Field-Name | ...
> 
>   It should just be:
> 
> 	... | Field-Name
>        Field-Name | ...
> 
>   i.e. without the last | on the first line, and the first | on the next line.
> 
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