Re: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-architecture-05.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 10 July 2020 15:13 UTC

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internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Remote ATtestation ProcedureS WG of the IETF.

    > Title           : Remote Attestation Procedures Architecture
    > Authors         : Henk Birkholz
    > Dave Thaler
    > Michael Richardson
    > Ned Smith
    > Wei Pan
    > Filename        : draft-ietf-rats-architecture-05.txt
    > Pages           : 36
    > Date            : 2020-07-10

    > Abstract:
    > In network protocol exchanges, it is often the case that one entity
    > (a Relying Party) requires evidence about a remote peer to assess the
    > peer's trustworthiness, and a way to appraise such evidence.  The
    > evidence is typically a set of claims about its software and hardware
    > platform.  This document describes an architecture for such remote
    > attestation procedures (RATS).


    > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rats-architecture/

    > There are also htmlized versions available at:
    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rats-architecture-05
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rats-architecture-05

    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rats-architecture-05

Hi, this is the result of a lot of consensus building among the authors and
contributors.  (Which reminds me that I probably need to update the list of
contributors)

We noticed one nit, "HD" remains in a table: we intend to add text that
explains it, but we feel the text should reference a document which the
WG has not (yet!?) decided to adopt.

Please review the diffs.
We believe that the document is "feature complete", but that there are some
sections where some would like to say more.

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