Re: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-architecture-08.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Tue, 08 December 2020 17:17 UTC

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internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Remote ATtestation ProcedureS WG of the IETF.

    > Title           : Remote Attestation Procedures Architecture
    
    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rats-architecture-08

Hi, we accepted the section order changes suggested by Simon Frost and his
team at ARM.  We made a number of other small changes (including to the
abstract), but we didn't want them to get lost in the bigger diff, so we
published this intermediate version.
We opened about 35 issues from the comments that Guy made in his review,
and we are working through those, and another 15 that were opened.

The Terminology was changed from alphabetical to be Roles and Artifacts, with
backwards references only.

the open issues can be seen at:
    https://github.com/ietf-rats-wg/architecture/issues

anyone who wants to adopt a few and suggest some text, that would be
appreciated.  Guy's marked up document is at:
    https://github.com/ietf-rats-wg/architecture/tree/master/reviews 
    (Sorry, there is no forward pointer in the document to the issue#)

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