Re: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20.txt

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Tue, 17 May 2022 22:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20.txt
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Hi!

Thanks for the revision of this draft to address IESG comments.  Can you please check the YANG syntax.  The datatracker is reporting new syntax errors.

Roman

> -----Original Message-----
> From: RATS <rats-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Sent: Tuesday, May 17, 2022 6:27 PM
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> Subject: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Remote ATtestation ProcedureS WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Challenge-Response-based Remote
> Attestation Procedures using TPMs
>         Authors         : Henk Birkholz
>                           Michael Eckel
>                           Shwetha Bhandari
>                           Eric Voit
>                           Bill Sulzen
>                           Liang Xia (Frank)
>                           Tom Laffey
>                           Guy C. Fedorkow
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20.txt
> 	Pages           : 59
> 	Date            : 2022-05-17
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines YANG RPCs and a few configuration nodes
>    required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity
>    measurements from a device, following the operational context defined
>    in TPM-based Network Device Remote Integrity Verification.
>    Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPCs,
>    originating from one or more roots of trust for measurement (RTMs).
>    The module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 as well
>    as a corresponding TPM Software Stack (TSS), or equivalent hardware
>    implementations that include the protected capabilities as provided
>    by TPMs as well as a corresponding software stack, included in the
>    device components of the composite device the YANG server is running
>    on.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra-20
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