Re: [re-ECN] FW: ConEx BoF announcement text

<toby.moncaster@bt.com> Mon, 26 October 2009 17:43 UTC

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{taking account of John Leslie's meta-comment about snipping text! Which
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: re-ecn-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:re-ecn-bounces@ietf.org] On
> Behalf Of philip.eardley@bt.com
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> Subject: Re: [re-ECN] FW: ConEx BoF announcement text
> 
> I found bob's new version much better, especially the more positive
> slant of the 'proposed para 4'.
> 
> My only 2 minor comments:-
> << However, TCP doesn't account for how much an application occupies
> capacity over time.>>
> I suggest tweaking this to say "how much a user or applications
> occupies"

That seems a little clumsy to me. I agree that we need to move back to
the idea that it is the user not the application that should be
accountable. How about 

"However, TCP fails to account for how a particular application occupies
capacity over time or which applications a user chooses to run."


> 
> <<These ad-hoc practices can stifle innovation at the transport and
> application layer ... This in turn has increasingly led to calls for
> government regulations>>
> I suggest tweaking this to say "These ad-hoc practices can stifle
> innovation at the transport and application layer, and have led to
> calls
> for government regulations [refs]".

Phil's version is much clearer... 

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Toby