Re: [re-ECN] ConEx BoF announcement

Hi Joao,

This looks pretty good to me - a couple of comments:

Please s/internet/Internet

I think the final sentence of the third para could use a little work, 
perhaps:

Once ISPs can see rest-of-path congestion, they can accurately and 
precisely discourage users from causing large volumes of congestion, 
they can discourage other networks from allowing their users to cause 
congestion, and they can more meaningfully differentiate between the 
qualities of services offered from potential connectivity partners.

Mat

On 12/10/2009 12:56, João Taveira Araújo wrote:
> Hi,
>
> We still need to produce an IETF wide announcement for the ConEx BoF.
> I've taken the last iteration of the draft charter, problem statement
> and BoF proposal and cut them down. Before bashing please take into
> account this announcement:
>
> - is meant to drum interest, which is why the potential uses are stated
> in the first paragraph
> - should not focus on technical solutions, so no mention of [re]ECN.
>
> For clarity's sake we should be looking at keeping it relatively short.
> Further detail can be kept for the BoF charter.
>
> Bash away,
> Joao.
>
>
>
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