Re: [re-ECN] preliminary draft of problem statement- authors wanted

<toby.moncaster@bt.com> Thu, 24 September 2009 08:03 UTC

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Hi Michael,

Thanks for the useful feedback. Clearly this document is still in its
very early stages. I will try and produce a new version by end of the
week  which will hopefully address some of your comments.

Meanwhile I am still keen to get volunteers willing to contribute chunks
of text for any of the sections. 

Toby

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Michael Menth [mailto:menth@informatik.uni-wuerzburg.de]
> Sent: 23 September 2009 22:41
> To: Moncaster,T,Toby,DER3 R
> Cc: re-ecn@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [re-ECN] preliminary draft of problem statement- authors
> wanted
> 
> Hi Toby,
> 
> I read the whole document and still it is unclear in many parts. I
> marked them in the attached doc-file. I hope this helps to improve its
> clarity.
> 
> Regards,
> 
>     Michael
> 
> toby.moncaster@bt.com schrieb:
> > Hi All,
> >
> > As promised here is a new draft of the problem statement with a bit
> more meat on the bones. There is still an awful lot of work to be done
> on this and not too much time to do it. Our absolute deadline to get
> something in is October 19th - only just over 3 weeks away...
> >
> > As before I would welcome any contributions of text or general
> comments. When I have a bit more time I will do proper xml2rfc author
> entries for everyone that has contributed... For political reasons I
> want it to be clear that this is a document that has been worked on
> from people across the whole range of the IETF community.
> >
> > Toby
> >
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