[regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-06

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 05 March 2020 09:25 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-03-05
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Since the document defines a set of object it was not easy for me to read it
without first reading draft-ietf-regext-data-escrow-05. The introduction
reference this document. As for the syntax , as a genart reviewer I did not
verify its correctness but noticed that there are known implementations.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: