Re: [regext] [IANA #1231866] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-eai (xml-registry)

Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com> Mon, 06 June 2022 23:11 UTC

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From: Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com>
Date: Mon, 06 Jun 2022 16:11:05 -0700
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Subject: Re: [regext] [IANA #1231866] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-eai (xml-registry)
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I see nits in this draft:

Section 2 says “A newer version of the extension is expected to use an XML
namespace with a higher version number than the prior versions” but I can't
find anything defining what they mean by "namespace version number". Maybe
I just missed it?  Maybe this would be obvious to someone familiar with
this RFC series? In which cases OK.

Section 6.1 says
“      XML:  None.  Namespace URIs do not represent an XML specification."
and then
"      XML:  See the "Formal Syntax" section of this document."

Hmm, a namespace URI identifies an XML markup vocabulary, so "None" is a
little jarring. If there's no XML why the namespace? And it also feels
inconsistent with the second statement.

And, more seriously, I can't find a "Formal Syntax" section in the draft,
so the 2nd statement needs a fix.


On Mon, Jun 6, 2022 at 3:58 PM Michelle Thangtamsatid via RT <
drafts-expert-review@iana.org> wrote:

> Dear Martin and Tim (cc: regext WG),
>
> As the respective designated experts for the namespace (ns) and schema
> registries located on the IETF XML Registry page, can you review the
> proposed registration in draft-ietf-regext-epp-eai for us? Please see
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-epp-eai-11
>
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll
> make the registration at
>
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/
>
> The IESG has asked us to set a two-week deadline for registration reviews.
> The due date for this request is 2022-06-20.
>
> Thank You,
>
> Michelle Thangtamsatid
> IANA Services Specialist
>
>