Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05.txt

["Gould, James" <[e-mail]>]

In reviewing draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05, below is my feedback:



  1.  Replace “defnition” with “definition” in two places.
  2.  Section 2.3 Maintenance Elements
     *   I would modify the description of the <maint:item> element.  Specifically, change the second sentence to read like “This element is used in a maintenance item EPP <info> response and <poll> message.”.
  3.  Section 3.1.3.1 “Query one maintenance item”
     *   The name “Query one maintenance item” could be shortened to “Info Maintenance Item”.
     *   I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance Item command element (<maint:id>) without making the reference to Section 2.3, since Section 2.3 defines the Info Maintenance Item Response.
     *   The command example incorrectly references <maint:impact>blackout</maint:impact> instead of <maint:impact>full</maint:impact>.
     *   The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)
     *   I would define the response similar to:

                                                               i.      When an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance namespace.  The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:item> element defined in Section 2.3.

  1.  Section 3.1.3.2 “Query maintenance list”
     *   The name could be updated to “Info Maintenance List”.
     *   I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance List element (<maint:list/>), which is an empty element to indicate an Info Maintenance List command.
     *   The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)
     *   I would define the response similar to:

                                                               i.      When an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance namespace.  The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:list> element with a list of <maint:listItem> elements.  The <maint:listItem> element contains the following child elements:

1.  <maint:id>: <maint:id> defined in Section 2.3.

2.  <maint:start>: <maint:start> defined in Section 2.3.

3.  <maint:end>: <maint:end> defined in Section 2.3.

4.  <maint:crDate>: <maint:crDate> defined in Section 2.3.

5.  <maint:upDate>: OPTIONAL <maint:upDate> defined in Section 2.3.

  1.  Sect 3.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command”
     *   The dates in the poll response example should be updated to more recent dates (e.g., update 2017 to 2020)



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On 12/1/20, 7:32 AM, "regext on behalf of [e-mail]" <[e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:



    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.

    This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF.



            Title           : Registry Maintenance Notifications for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)

            Authors         : Tobias Sattler

                              Roger Carney

                              Jody Kolker

                Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05.txt

                Pages           : 20

                Date            : 2020-12-01



    Abstract:

       This document describes an Extensible Provision Protocol (EPP)

       mapping for registry's maintenance notifications.





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