Re: [regext] [Ext] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-08

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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Gustavo Lozano <gustavo.lozano@icann.org>
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Subject: Re: [regext] [Ext] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-08
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Hey, Gustavo.  I’ve read through the changes, and yes, you addressed my concerns.  Thanks for the additional normative language and the attention to defining terminology.

Joe

> On Aug 12, 2020, at 19:07, Gustavo Lozano <gustavo.lozano@icann.org> wrote:
> 
> Thank you Joe,
> 
> Version 09 of the draft has been published. The authors believe that this version addresses your feedback.
> 
> The differences are here:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-09
> 
> Regards,
> Gustavo
> 
> On 7/25/20, 08:47, "Joe Clarke via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
>    Reviewer: Joe Clarke
>    Review result: Has Issues
> 
>    I didn't see any of my comments addressed in the text nor do I recall seeing a
>    reply to my previous review.  I;m copying my previous review here.
> 
>    I have been assigned to review this document on behalf of the Ops Area
>    Directorate.  This document augments the work set forth in
>    I-D.ietf-regext-data-escrow to specify the objects that can be used in Domain
>    Name Registration Data escrow deposits.  What I found most useful in this
>    document is the incremental examples of the objects with the full XML and CSV
>    deposit (and diff deposit) examples at the bottom.  In general, the fields in
>    the object models were well specified and coupled with the examples, it helped
>    to piece together the product one might need to produce.
> 
>    That said, I went back and forth between "Has Nits" and "Has Issues".  One
>    thing that would really help this document is a full terminology/glossary
>    section that includes expansions of abbreviations like RDE, EPP, NNDN, etc. 
>    Some abbreviations like TLD, CSV, and IDN are expanded, but this is very much
>    required for all and throughout with very common ones done so in the
>    terminology section.
> 
>    Next, in Section 4.4, you talk about CSV file checksums.  First, you reference
>    ISO-3309 (HDLC?) but there is no actual reference like there is with
>    ISO-3166-1.  But why use crc32 for a file checksum?  Why reference HDLC as the
>    model?  I would think a SHA-2 checksum would be better for an actual file to
>    ensure it has not been tampered with.
> 
>    When you talk about file compression for CSV (Section 4.6.2.1), you mention
>    compression may use zip or gzip.  There is no normative language here, and I
>    can imagine escrow holders would need to know the allowed values.  If I use xz
>    will that be allowed?  Will the consumer know how to decompress that?  What is
>    "zip" and "gzip" exactly and how should they be handled?  My advice is some
>    normative text here explaining the supported or allowed formats and by what
>    standard those are defined.
> 
>    Finally, as a nit, I noticed two instances of IPv6 address
>    1080:0:0:0:8:800:200C:417A when showing XML model examples.  In the CSV
>    examples you use an address from the doc range.  Did you mean to do so here as
>    well?
> 
> 
>