[regext] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for the work on this. I have a few comments:

*** Substantive Comments ***

§1: "An organization mapping object defined in [ID.draft-ietf-regext-org]
SHOULD be created first."

First before what?

*** Editorial Comments ***

- General:
I'm a little confused by the split in material between draft-ietf-regext-org
and draft-ietf-regext-org-ext, especially how the command mapping and related
info seems to span both documents. It seems a bit reader-unfriendly. But it's
late enough in the process that it's probably not worth changing.

- Abstract: Please expand EPP on first mention both in the abstract and in the
body.

§2, 3rd paragraph:  I know we are not consistent about this, but I find the
word “conforming” to be a red flag. Standards track RFCs should be about
interoperability, not conformance. I suggest striking all after “presented”.