[regext] Re: [IANA #1369316] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl (xml-registry)

Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com> Wed, 31 July 2024 00:05 UTC

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This looks fine to me. In section 2.1.1.2, should the 2nd example have “S”
in the left column?

On Jul 30, 2024 at 3:03:22 PM, David Dong via RT <
drafts-expert-review-comment@iana.org> wrote:

> Hi Martin Thomson, Tim Bray,
>
> As the designated expert for the XML ns and schema registries, can you
> review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15 for us?
> Please see:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl/
>
> The due date is August 13th.
>
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll
> make the registration at:
>
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/
>
> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewer, we’ll act on the first
> response we receive.
>
> Best regards,
>
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
>