Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt

Hi Scott,

please find below some possible changes to RFC7482bis.

1) Section 1. - I would replace "are" with "is" in the following sentence:

The intent of the patterns described here are to enable queries

2) Section 3.1.1 - I would remove the phrase "if possible" in the 
following sentence:

therefore, the

    corresponding syntax extension in RFC 6874 [RFC6874] MUST NOT be

    used, and servers are to ignore it if possible.

3) Section 4.1 - I would rewrite the following statement using 
MUST/REQUIRED

Only a single asterisk is allowed for a partial string search.

4) Section 4.1 - I would uppercase "should" in:

    Clients should avoid submitting a partial match search of Unicode

    characters where a Unicode character may be legally combined with

    another Unicode character or characters.

Best,

Mario

Il 05/06/2020 17:36, internet-drafts@ietf.org ha scritto:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF.
>
>          Title           : Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Query Format
>          Authors         : Scott Hollenbeck
>                            Andy Newton
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt
> 	Pages           : 25
> 	Date            : 2020-06-05
>
> Abstract:
>     This document describes uniform patterns to construct HTTP URLs that
>     may be used to retrieve registration information from registries
>     (including both Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) and Domain Name
>     Registries (DNRs)) using "RESTful" web access patterns.  These
>     uniform patterns define the query syntax for the Registration Data
>     Access Protocol (RDAP).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
>
> _______________________________________________
> regext mailing list
> regext@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext

-- 
Dr. Mario Loffredo
Systems and Technological Development Unit
Institute of Informatics and Telematics (IIT)
National Research Council (CNR)
via G. Moruzzi 1, I-56124 PISA, Italy
Phone: +39.0503153497
Mobile: +39.3462122240
Web: http://www.iit.cnr.it/mario.loffredo
#pleasestayathome