[regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15

Per Andersson via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 30 August 2024 09:30 UTC

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Subject: [regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15
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Reviewer: Per Andersson
Review result: Ready

Reviewer: Per Andersson
Review Result: Ready

This is my review of OPSDIR draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15.

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.


Summary:

This document describes an extension to the Extensible Provisioning
Protocol (EPP) that allows EPP clients to manage the Time-To-Live
(TTL) value for domain name delegation records.


Issues:

None


Nits:

The following nits are present.

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7451

  -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'XSD-DATATYPES'

The Downref error seems to be fixed in the git repository for the
document. Please publish this change.


Than you for a well written document!


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Per

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