[regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-sorting-and-paging-15

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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-sorting-and-paging-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2020-08-15
IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard, with a
couple of nits.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 2

- Section 6: I understand that RFC7942 requests the authors to add a note to
the RFC Editor to remove this section, but I also understand that this is a
request to the author, and not a mandate (no normative language).   As an
implementer, I always find it easy to start with some bootstrapping  code, so I
find such implementation notes helpful.  You may wish to consider including
this information in an Appendix.

- Section 1, towards end of Page 3: s/that could be/that is often/ (Reason:
"could be" implies that truncation could happen, but is may not, "is often"
implies the same thing, but that phrase seems somehow more deterministic than
"could be".  This is a suggestion, please use your editorial discretion as
appropriate.)