Re: [regext] [Ext] Re: WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec

Gustavo Lozano <gustavo.lozano@icann.org> Mon, 06 April 2020 23:12 UTC

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From: Gustavo Lozano <gustavo.lozano@icann.org>
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "ietf@antoin.nl" <ietf@antoin.nl>, "regext@ietf.org" <regext@ietf.org>
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Thank you Scott,

Comments inline.

Regards,
Gustavo

On 2/28/20, 07:17, "regext on behalf of Hollenbeck, Scott" <regext-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of shollenbeck=40verisign.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: regext <regext-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Antoin Verschuren
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    > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-
    > spec
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    > The following working group document is believed to be ready for
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    +1, but I do see some minor issues in Section 10, IANA Considerations:
    
    1. "One URI assignment have been registered by the IANA", but two assignments are requested. That text should say "Two URI assignments have been registered by the IANA".

GL- Fixed in version 07, here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec-07.txt

    
    2. It's been a recent convention to include "epp" in the URNs, e.g. "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:<identifier>" vs. "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:<identifier>". It may be worth noting somewhere why that convention isn't being followed here. Perhaps there are existing implementations that would be difficult to change?

GL- There are existing implementations that would be extremely difficult to change. The first version of this draft is from March 2013, and the draft was developed while the TMCH implementation was ongoing.
    

    3. The schema URN is incorrect. "URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:tmNotice-1.0" should be "URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:tmNotice-1.0".

GL- Fixed in version 07, here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec-07.txt

    
    Scott
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