Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-01.txt

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Fri, 08 May 2020 13:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-01.txt
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of
> internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Sent: Friday, May 8, 2020 9:23 AM
> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-01.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> 
> 
>         Title           : JSON Responses for the Registration Data Access Protocol
> (RDAP)
>         Authors         : Scott Hollenbeck
>                           Andy Newton
> 	Filename        : draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 85
> 	Date            : 2020-05-08
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes JSON data structures representing
>    registration information maintained by Regional Internet Registries
>    (RIRs) and Domain Name Registries (DNRs).  These data structures are
>    used to form Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) query
>    responses.

This update addresses all known comments that I've seen to date. Please take a read through it to confirm that your feedback has been addressed to your satisfaction. I also made some changes to address things found by idnits, such as two long lines and obsolete normative references.

Scott