Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt

Hi Scott,

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> Il giorno 17 giu 2020, alle ore 15:34, Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenbeck@verisign.com> ha scritto:
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> From: regext <regext-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Mario Loffredo
> Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 11:14 AM
> To: regext@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt
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> Hi Scott,
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> please find below some possible changes to RFC7482bis.
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> 1) Section 1. - I would replace "are" with "is" in the following sentence:
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> The intent of the patterns described here are to enable queries
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> [SAH] Agreed.
> 2) Section 3.1.1 - I would remove the phrase "if possible" in the following sentence:
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> therefore, the
>    corresponding syntax extension in RFC 6874 [RFC6874] MUST NOT be
>    used, and servers are to ignore it if possible.
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> [SAH] Agreed.
> 3) Section 4.1 - I would rewrite the following statement using MUST/REQUIRED 
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> Only a single asterisk is allowed for a partial string search.
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> [SAH] Suggestion: “A partial string search MUST NOT include more than one asterisk.”

Agreed.
> 4) Section 4.1 - I would uppercase "should" in:
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>    Clients should avoid submitting a partial match search of Unicode
>    characters where a Unicode character may be legally combined with
>    another Unicode character or characters.
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> [SAH] Agreed.
> Best,
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> Mario
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> Il 05/06/2020 17:36, internet-drafts@ietf.org ha scritto:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF.
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>         Title           : Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Query Format
>         Authors         : Scott Hollenbeck
>                           Andy Newton
>  Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt
>  Pages           : 25
>  Date            : 2020-06-05
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> Abstract:
>    This document describes uniform patterns to construct HTTP URLs that
>    may be used to retrieve registration information from registries
>    (including both Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) and Domain Name
>    Registries (DNRs)) using "RESTful" web access patterns.  These
>    uniform patterns define the query syntax for the Registration Data
>    Access Protocol (RDAP).
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis/
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> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00
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> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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