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"Andrew Newton (andy)" <andy@hxr.us> Tue, 23 July 2024 23:04 UTC

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Hi Jasdip and Tom,

I think this is a really well done draft.

I have the following comments:

1. The registrations in the IANA section run together. I would be
easier to distinguish the individual registrations if they were
numbered and the bullet points were nested, or some other visual
property that separates them.

2. The mention of "lookup URL" in Section 5 and Section 7 could use a
reference to Section 3.1 of RFC 9082 as you have done section 4.1 of
your draft.

3. The search pattern for autnums?handle in section 2.3 says that the
pattern is up to each "registration provider". Does that mean each
RIR? This does not seem to be very predictable for a client in that it
needs to know, somehow, the search pattern of the server. Could you
define the search pattern, as is specified in Section 4.1 of RFC 9082?
Or maybe reference Section 4.1 of RFC 9082?

-andy

On Fri, Jul 12, 2024 at 2:18 PM James Galvin <galvin@elistx.com> wrote:
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> The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready for submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Best Current Practice:
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> RDAP RIR Search
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search/09/
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> This document has been through WGLC previously.  However, a number of questions arose and changes were made that are considered material and thus we are proceeding with this additional WGLC.
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