[regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17: (with COMMENT)

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

-- Section 3.3 --

In "mantid", should the reference for the encoding of the language be mentioned
?

The use of "maint:tlds" seems to indicate a limitation to top-level domains
only (even if the text mentions later "registry zone") but EPP is used not only
for TLD. Suggest to make it even clearer (as I am afraid that it is too late in
the process to change the element name).

-- Section 4.1.3.1 --
In the example, there is "<maint:type lang="en">" but lang is not specified as
an attribute of "maint:type" in section 3.3.