Re: [regext] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09: (with COMMENT)

"Linlin Zhou" <zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn> Thu, 25 October 2018 06:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: [regext] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Ben,
Thank you for your review. Please see my feedbacks below with [Linlin].

Regards,
Linlin


Linlin Zhou
 
From: Ben Campbell
Date: 2018-10-24 06:00
To: The IESG
CC: regext-chairs; pieter.vandepitte; regext; draft-ietf-regext-org-ext
Subject: [regext] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for the work on this. I have a few comments:
 
*** Substantive Comments ***
 
§1: "An organization mapping object defined in [ID.draft-ietf-regext-org]
SHOULD be created first."
 
First before what?
[Linlin] I noticed that Benjamin had the same comment. So I suggest changing some words here, "Organization object identifiers MUST be known to the server before the organization object can be associated with the EPP object.".
 
*** Editorial Comments ***
 
- General:
I'm a little confused by the split in material between draft-ietf-regext-org
and draft-ietf-regext-org-ext, especially how the command mapping and related
info seems to span both documents. It seems a bit reader-unfriendly. But it's
late enough in the process that it's probably not worth changing.
[Linlin] Please see my feedback in the "org" draft.
 
- Abstract: Please expand EPP on first mention both in the abstract and in the
body.
[Linlin] Yes.
 
§2, 3rd paragraph:  I know we are not consistent about this, but I find the
word “conforming” to be a red flag. Standards track RFCs should be about
interoperability, not conformance. I suggest striking all after “presented”.
[Linlin] OK.
 
 
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