Re: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

Wow, David, thanks for the super-quick review!

Barry

On Fri, Jul 24, 2020 at 6:48 PM David Schinazi via Datatracker <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review result: Ready with Issues
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review Date: 2020-07-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-14
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Document is clear, well-written, and short. Thank you!
>
> Major issues: None
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> Minor issues: After reading the document, I was somewhat
> confused as to the definition of fieldSet query parameter.
> I think adding a few sentences to Section 2 explaining that
> a field set is a string that the server generates which maps
> to a set of fields only known to the server would help.
> Additionally, specifying that the string can't be empty and
> which characters are allowed might help avoid interop
> issues down the road.
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> Nits/editorial comments: None
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