Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Sun, 15 July 2018 19:43 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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Subject: Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>
> Sent: Saturday, July 14, 2018 2:37 PM
> To: Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenbeck@verisign.com>; Hollenbeck, Scott
> <shollenbeck@verisign.com>; 'regext@ietf.org' <regext@ietf.org>; 'draft-
> ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag@tools.ietf.org' <draft-ietf-regext-rdap-
> object-tag@tools.ietf.org>
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-
> tag
>
> On 6/6/18 06:56, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>
> ....
> >>>> I read the text as calling for implementors to concatenate "XXXX-
> YYYY"
> >>>> to the
> >>>> end of the IANA-registered base URL ("https://example.com/rdap/"),
> >>>> resulting in "https://example.com/rdap/XXXX-YYYY". The example
> >>>> instead shows "https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-YYY". Is the
> >>>> inclusion of "entity/" in this example an error?
> >>> No, it's not an error. That’s the path segment that 7482 describes
> >>> for
> >> entity queries. I can see how my text above might be confusing,
> >> though, so how about this wording instead?
> >>> OLD:
> >>> "The base RDAP URL is concatenated to the entity handle to create a
> >> complete RDAP query path segment of
> >> "https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-
> >> YYYY""
> >>> NEW:
> >>> "The RDAP query URL is formed using the base RDAP URL and entity
> >>> path
> >> segment described in Section 3.1.5 of RFC 7482, using "XXXX-YYY" as
> >> the value of the handle identifier. The complete RDAP query URL
> >> becomes "https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-YYYY"."
> >>
> >> That seems good.
> >>
> >> Thanks for the explanations. Based on what you've said, I think this
> >> is ready for IETF last call -- you can treat my comment for
> >> clarification of the example as an IETF last call comment, and
> >> address it along with any other feedback you receive during last call.
> > Will do - thanks!
>
> IETF Last Call has concluded, and I didn't see any other comments that
> would necessitate changes in the document. Just to make sure we're on the
> same page, I'm waiting on a -04 version of the document reflecting the
> above change prior to asking for the IESG to ballot on the document.
> Let me know if that's not what you expect.

Thanks. Yes, I'll update it in the next day or so.

Scott