Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt

From: regext <regext-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Mario Loffredo
Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 11:14 AM
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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt

Hi Scott,

please find below some possible changes to RFC7482bis.

1) Section 1. - I would replace "are" with "is" in the following sentence:

The intent of the patterns described here are to enable queries

[SAH] Agreed.

2) Section 3.1.1 - I would remove the phrase "if possible" in the following sentence:

therefore, the
   corresponding syntax extension in RFC 6874 [RFC6874] MUST NOT be
   used, and servers are to ignore it if possible.

[SAH] Agreed.

3) Section 4.1 - I would rewrite the following statement using MUST/REQUIRED

Only a single asterisk is allowed for a partial string search.

[SAH] Suggestion: "A partial string search MUST NOT include more than one asterisk."

4) Section 4.1 - I would uppercase "should" in:

   Clients should avoid submitting a partial match search of Unicode
   characters where a Unicode character may be legally combined with
   another Unicode character or characters.

[SAH] Agreed.

Best,

Mario

Il 05/06/2020 17:36, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> ha scritto:

   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
   This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF.

           Title           : Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Query Format
           Authors         : Scott Hollenbeck
                             Andy Newton
    Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt
    Pages           : 25
    Date            : 2020-06-05

   Abstract:
      This document describes uniform patterns to construct HTTP URLs that
      may be used to retrieve registration information from registries
      (including both Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) and Domain Name
      Registries (DNRs)) using "RESTful" web access patterns.  These
      uniform patterns define the query syntax for the Registration Data
      Access Protocol (RDAP).

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