Re: [rfc-i] Update on the CSS - second round

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 21 February 2017 21:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [rfc-i] Update on the CSS - second round
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A tiny detail: in the References sections, the citation labels
are right-aligned, which looks strange and makes visual searching
slightly painful. I think they should be left-aligned.

Example:
https://rfc-format.github.io/draft-iab-rfc-css-bis/sample2-v2.html#n-informative

There are also two specific issues with the very first reference there:
1) the infamous double-comma problem; I hoped we would be rid of that
2) the reference label is too long. At least there should be a style guide
warning about this.

Regards
   Brian
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