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charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Dear Authors, Thank you for the latest version of this document. I have some further comm= ents/corrections before I move the document forward. Please review and publ= ish a new version as soon as possible: 171 Section 4.2.3.8 "Southbound Default Route Origination" of RIFT Jim> This is an incorrect reference. It should be Section 6.3.8 (v-21 of th= e RIFT spec). Please correct the reference. 215 A spine node has only information necessary for its level, which is 216 all destinations south of the node based on SPF calculation, defaul= t 217 route, and potential disaggregated routes. Jim> Change =91potential=92 to =91potentially=92 above. 225 * Minimal routes/info on Top-of-Rack (ToR) switches, aka leaf node= s Jim> Change =91routes/info=92 to =91routes/information=92 above. 1045 5.8. Mobile Edge and Anycast 1047 When a physical or a virtual node changes its point of attachement = in Jim> Correct typo =91attachement=92 above. 1068 Section 4.3.3. "Mobility" of [RIFT] specifies an hybrid method tha= t Jim> Above reference is incorrect. Section 6.8.4 of [RIFT] is the correct r= eference. Please correct it. 1105 the point of attachement changes. This way, it is possible to Jim> Correct typo above. 1109 of its points of attachement. Jim> Correct typo above. 1111 5.9. IPv4 over IPv6 1115 mechanisms and then V4 can use V6 nexthops analogous to [RFC8950]. Jim> Replace =91nexthops=92 with =91next-hops=92 1408 5.17. Key Management 1410 As outlined in Section "Security Considerations" of [RIFT], either = a Jim> Please update reference to =91Section 9 =93Security Considerations=94 = of [RIFT]=92. Thanks! Jim --_000_MW5PR13MB54850078CDC745BEE9B42A07D2082MW5PR13MB5485namp_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Dear Authors,

 

Thank you for the latest version of this document. I= have some further comments/corrections before I move the document forward.= Please review and publish a new version as soon as possible:

 

171     Section 4.2.3.8 "Southbound Default Route Or= igination" of RIFT

 

Jim> This is an incorrect reference. = It should be Section 6.3.8 (v-21 of the RIFT spec). Please correct the refe= rence.

 

215     A spine node has only information necessary for i= ts level, which is

216     all destinations south of the node based on SPF c= alculation, default

217     route, and potential disaggregated routes.=

 

Jim> Change =91potential=92 to =91pot= entially=92 above.

 

225     *&nb= sp; Minimal routes/info on Top-of-Rack (ToR) swit= ches, aka leaf nodes

 

Jim> Change =91routes/info=92 to =91r= outes/information=92 above.

 

1045  5.8.  Mobile Edge and Anycast

 

1047    When a physical or a virtual node changes its poi= nt of attachement in

 

Jim> Correct typo =91attachement=92 a= bove.

 

1068    Section 4.3.3.  "Mobility" of [RIFT] specifies an hybri= d method that

 

Jim> Above reference is incorrect. Se= ction 6.8.4 of [RIFT] is the correct reference. Please correct it.

 

1105    the point of attachement changes.  This way, it is possible to

 

Jim> Correct typo above.<= /o:p>

 

1109    of its points of attachement.

 

Jim> Correct typo above.<= /o:p>

 

1111  5.9.  IPv4 over IPv6

 

1115    mechanisms and then V4 can use V6 nexthops analog= ous to [RFC8950].

 

Jim> Replace =91nexthops=92 with =91n= ext-hops=92

 

1408  5.17.  Key Management

 

1410    As outlined in Section "Security Considerati= ons" of [RIFT], either a

 

Jim> Please update reference to =91Se= ction 9 =93Security Considerations=94 of [RIFT]=92.

 

Thanks!

 

Jim

 

 

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