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Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt

Melchior Aelmans <melchior@aelmans.eu> Sun, 03 May 2020 20:00 UTC

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From: Melchior Aelmans <melchior@aelmans.eu>
Date: Sun, 03 May 2020 21:59:45 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt
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Hi, spotted another one; "it results thet the use of", should be "it
results that the use of". Also in section 4.6

Cheers,
Melchior

On Sun, May 3, 2020 at 9:37 PM Melchior Aelmans <melchior@aelmans.eu> wrote:

> Dear authors,
>
> I've spotted a small typo in section 4.6. Positive vs. Negative
> Disaggregation:
>
> Disaggregation is the procedure whereby [RIFT <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01#ref-RIFT>] advertises more a specific route Southwards as an exception to the aggregated fabric-default North.
>
>
> I think you are trying to say "advertises a more sepcific".
>
> Cheers,
> Melchior
>
> On Fri, Apr 3, 2020 at 10:54 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Routing In Fat Trees WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : RIFT Applicability
>>         Authors         : Yuehua Wei
>>                           Zheng Zhang
>>                           Dmitry Afanasiev
>>                           Tom Verhaeg
>>                           Jaroslaw Kowalczyk
>>                           Pascal Thubert
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt
>>         Pages           : 29
>>         Date            : 2020-04-03
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document discusses the properties, applicability and operational
>>    considerations of RIFT in different network scenarios.  It intends to
>>    provide a rough guide how RIFT can be deployed to simplify routing
>>    operations in Clos topologies and their variations.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rift-applicability/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01
>>
>>
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