Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt

Hi

Will reflect the correction to version -03.

Thank you so much!

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发件人：MelchiorAelmans
收件人：draft-wei-rift-applicability@ietf.org;
抄送人：rift@ietf.org;
日 期 ：2020年10月12日 21:38
主 题 ：Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt

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Hi,

I don't believe the below was corrected in the -02 version as it still reads "more a specific" instead of "a more specific".

Cheers,
Melchior

On Sun, May 3, 2020 at 9:37 PM Melchior Aelmans <melchior@aelmans.eu> wrote:

Dear authors,

I've spotted a small typo in section 4.6. Positive vs. Negative Disaggregation:

Disaggregation is the procedure whereby [RIFT] advertises more a specific route Southwards as an exception to the aggregated fabric-default North.

I think you are trying to say "advertises a more sepcific".

Cheers,

Melchior

On Fri, Apr 3, 2020 at 10:54 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Routing In Fat Trees WG of the IETF.

        Title           : RIFT Applicability
        Authors         : Yuehua Wei
                          Zheng Zhang
                          Dmitry Afanasiev
                          Tom Verhaeg
                          Jaroslaw Kowalczyk
                          Pascal Thubert
        Filename        : draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt
        Pages           : 29
        Date            : 2020-04-03

Abstract:
   This document discusses the properties, applicability and operational
   considerations of RIFT in different network scenarios.  It intends to
   provide a rough guide how RIFT can be deployed to simplify routing
   operations in Clos topologies and their variations.

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rift-applicability/

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