Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt

Melchior Aelmans <melchior@aelmans.eu> Sun, 03 May 2020 19:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rift] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt
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Dear authors,

I've spotted a small typo in section 4.6. Positive vs. Negative
Disaggregation:

Disaggregation is the procedure whereby [RIFT
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01#ref-RIFT>]
advertises more a specific route Southwards as an exception to the
aggregated fabric-default North.


I think you are trying to say "advertises a more sepcific".

Cheers,
Melchior

On Fri, Apr 3, 2020 at 10:54 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Routing In Fat Trees WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : RIFT Applicability
>         Authors         : Yuehua Wei
>                           Zheng Zhang
>                           Dmitry Afanasiev
>                           Tom Verhaeg
>                           Jaroslaw Kowalczyk
>                           Pascal Thubert
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rift-applicability-01.txt
>         Pages           : 29
>         Date            : 2020-04-03
>
> Abstract:
>    This document discusses the properties, applicability and operational
>    considerations of RIFT in different network scenarios.  It intends to
>    provide a rough guide how RIFT can be deployed to simplify routing
>    operations in Clos topologies and their variations.
>
>
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