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Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections

Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> Thu, 30 January 2020 16:11 UTC

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From: Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 30 Jan 2020 08:09:42 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Rift] Call for more volunteers to readability review of RIFT draft sections
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I got volunteers for 5,6,7

Still need 4.x.x. remnants, acknowledgement section and eternal fame
beckons ;-)

--- tony

On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 8:33 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Can I please have some reviewers step forward so we can cover that
> remaining sections of ongoing -10 draft for the last IESG comments (we
> basically need a 3rd party read helping with smoothing the flow of text and
> improve general public readability mainly, fine-comb normative language, no
> hairy technical issues discussions or anything like this necessary)
>
> we have everything reviewed until 4.2.4
>
> we need reviews for 4.2.5 until 8
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> good resolution in terms of size and stuff that belongs together would be
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> 4.2.5
> 4.2.6
> 4.2.7
> 4.3
> 4.4
> 5.
> 6.
> 7.
>
> volunteers much appreciated
>
> --- tony
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