Re: [rmcat] Shepherd's review of draft-ietf-rmcat-rtp-cc-feedback

[Colin Perkins <[e-mail]>]

Version -09 has been submitted, that’s intended to address these 
comments.
Colin


On 9 Mar 2022, at 0:45, Anna Brunström wrote:

> Dear all,
>
> I am preparing the shepherd's write-up for 
> draft-ietf-rmcat-rtp-cc-feedback. I have a few editorial comments from 
> the shepherd's review of the document. You can find them included 
> below.
>
> Best Regards,
> Anna
>
>
> Section 1:
> [RFC8861], [RFC8861]
> remove duplicate reference
>
> Section 2:
> 2. Possible Models for RTCP Feedback
> Title does not really reflect the content of the section, suggest 
> "Considerations for RTCP Feedback"
>
> so-called "stretch-ACK" behaviour is non-standard and not guaranteed
> Perhaps add a reference for stretch ACKs?
>
> The RTP standards have long said that a 5% overhead for RTCP traffic 
> generally acceptable
> ... traffic is generally acceptable
>
> possibility with a higher overhead?
> possibly with a higher overhead
>
> changes the sending rate
> changes to the sending rate
>
> Section 3.1:
>
> Tf seconds (Tf = 20ms in many cases, but values up to 60ms are not 
> uncommon)
> mismatch in the units
>
> The CCFB packets contains
> The CCFB packets contain
>
> Table 1: RTCP bandwidth needed for VoIP feedback
> Table 1: RTCP bandwidth needed for VoIP feedback (compound reports 
> only) - To be consistent with Table 2 caption
>
> Section 3.2:
>
> Draft says: These "non-compound" (actually, compound but reduced size 
> in this case) RTCP packets
> After this, the text use a mix of "non-compound" and "reduced size". I 
> find this a bit confusing. Maybe better to stick to one.
>
> every frames
> every frame
>
> Section 4:
> needs be
> needs to be
>
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