[rmcat] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd-11: (with COMMENT)
Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Thu, 05 April 2018 06:28 UTC
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Subject: [rmcat] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd-11: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd-11: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for everyone's work on this document, and especially to those who ran the preliminary experiments. This sounds like an interesting technique. I have two minor comments. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §2: > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", > "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and > "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP > 14 [RFC2119] RFC2119 [RFC2119] RFC8174 [RFC8174] when, and only when, > they appear in all capitals, as shown here. This is almost, but not quite, the boilerplate defined in RFC 8174. Please consider fixing it. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §2.1 says "Usually M=N", while §2.2 recommends N=50 and M=30. These statements seem in conflict.