Re: [rmcat] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: "Xiaoqing Zhu (xiaoqzhu)" <xiaoqzhu@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Xiaoqing

Thank you having taken into account my comments and thank you for the document.

Regards

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: "Xiaoqing Zhu (xiaoqzhu)" <xiaoqzhu@cisco.com>
Date: Friday, 13 March 2020 at 20:48
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>om>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: "rmcat-chairs@ietf.org" <rmcat-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, "draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests@ietf.org>rg>, "csp@csperkins.org" <csp@csperkins.org>rg>, "rmcat@ietf.org" <rmcat@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [rmcat] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)

    Hi Eric, 
    
    Many thanks for reviewing this draft and providing your comments. The updated version (-11) has accommodated your input and can be viewed online: 
    
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-11
    
    Please also see our detailed responses inline below, tagged [authors]. 
    
    Thanks,
    Xiaoqing (on behalf of all authors)
    
    On 3/5/20, 8:16 AM, "rmcat on behalf of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker" <rmcat-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
    
        Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
        draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: No Objection
        
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        COMMENT:
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        Thank you for the work put into this document. It is really easy to read.
        
        Please find below some non-blocking COMMENTs and NITs. An answer will be
        appreciated.
        
        I hope that this helps to improve the document,
        
        Regards,
        
        -éric
        
        == COMMENTS ==
        
        -- Section 1 --
        Does the following assertion always stand ? "This contrasts with the wired
        network setting where traffic flows from all users share the same queue."
    
    
    [authors] Not always but it's a typical setting for wired networks. We revised the
    sentence accordingly:
    
    "This contrasts with a typical wired network setting ... at the bottleneck."
        
        -- Section 3.1.2 --
        As a frequent high speed train passenger, I would have appreciated a simulation
        with mobility of 300 km/h ;-)
        
    
    [authors] Thanks for your interest in testing out a high-speed mobility case :)
    For now, the current recommended parameters are limited to simulations that we
    have already evaluated. We are open to adding new test parameters in future drafts
    _after_ someone has test driven that case in simulations.
    
    
        == NITS ==
        
        -- Section 3.1.2 --
        s/10Mhz/10MHz/ ?
        
    [authors] Thanks for catching this. Fixed.