Re: [rmcat] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rmcat-coupled-cc-05.txt

Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> Sun, 26 March 2017 17:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [rmcat] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rmcat-coupled-cc-05.txt
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> On 25 Mar 2017, at 05:53, Michael Welzl <michawe@ifi.uio.no>; wrote:
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> This is actually there but too weakly qualified:
> 
> ***
> a priority P(f), which here is assumed to be represented as a
>      positive number within a fixed range.
> ***
> 
> Suggest to change to:
> 
> ***
> a priority P(f), which is a positive number within a fixed range.
> ***


I’d suggest “which is a positive number, greater than zero” to be clear zero is excluded. 

Also “within a fixed range” - what’s the range? It might be okay to remove this part.

Cheers,
Colin



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