Re: [rmcat] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Xiaoqing Zhu (xiaoqzhu)" <xiaoqzhu@cisco.com>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [rmcat] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for your review inputs on this draft. The updated version (-11) is now online: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-11

Please also see our detailed responses below inline, tagged [authors]. 

Best Regards,
Xiaoqing (on behalf of all authors)

On 3/5/20, 4:29 AM, "rmcat on behalf of Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker" <rmcat-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: No Objection
    
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    Thanks to Adam for noting the author-count already.
    
    Section 3
    
       Different mobile operators deploy their own cellular networks with
       their own set of network functionalities and policies.  Usually, a
       mobile operator network includes 2G, EDGE, 3G and 4G radio access
    
    Is 2G still "typical"?  I was given to understand it was getting phased
    out.

[authors]  Agree that 2G is now outdated. We've revised the sentence to:

	Usually, a mobile operator network includes a range of radio access
	technologies such as 3G and 4G/LTE.

    Section 3.1, 3.2
    
    How do I tell how much time is "enough time to warm-up the network"?


[authors] Thanks for noting this lack of clarity. We've added a sentence to
both Sec. 2.1 and 2.2 (previously Sec. 3.1 and 3.2) to explain what it really means: 

	... Typically, the evaluation period starts 30 seconds after test
   	initialization.

    
    Section 4.2.3
    
       b.  Multiple RTP-based media flows sharing the wireless uplink:N = 16
           (all downlink); M = 0.  When multiple clients attempt to transmit
    
    I'm not sure how to interpret the parenthetical; is it a copy/paste
    issue from (a) that should read "all uplink"?

[authors] Thanks for catching this error. It was meant to be "all uplink". Fixed now.