Re: [rmcat] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Xiaoqing Zhu (xiaoqzhu)" <xiaoqzhu@cisco.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [rmcat] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry,

Thanks for your review. We have updated the draft to -11, with link below: 

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-11

We have followed your suggestion to remove the BCP 14 boilerplate, and have changed all mentions of MUST/SHOULD/MAY, etc., to lowercase. 

Best,
Xiaoqing 

On 3/4/20, 11:34 PM, "Barry Leiba via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: No Objection
    
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    You include the BCP 14 boilerplate and references, but the only BCP 14 key word
    in the document is a MUST in Section 6 that seems like it doesnt need to be BCP
    14 in this document (it seems to refer to a tenet, not a requirement specified
    in this document).  I suggest removing the boilerplate and the references and
    making the “must” lower case.