[rmcat] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-rmcat-scream-cc-12: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

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COMMENT:
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Just a few mostly editorial comments:

- Abstract: By "such as video", am I correct to assume this is specific to
interactive video?

- 3.3: The MUST and MAY seem more like statements of fact than normative
requirements.

- 4.1.2, last paragraph: The MAY seems like a statement of fact.

- 4.1.2.3, last paragraph: Ditto for the SHOULD

-- Informational References:  It seems like the references to RFCs 3550 and
3611 are needed to really understand this document, which would make them
normative.