Re: [rmcat] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Xiaoqing Zhu (xiaoqzhu)" <xiaoqzhu@cisco.com>
To: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Hi Eric, 

Many thanks for reviewing this draft and providing your comments. The updated version (-11) has accommodated your input and can be viewed online: 

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-11

Please also see our detailed responses inline below, tagged [authors]. 

Thanks,
Xiaoqing (on behalf of all authors)

On 3/5/20, 8:16 AM, "rmcat on behalf of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker" <rmcat-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-rmcat-wireless-tests-09: No Objection
    
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    Thank you for the work put into this document. It is really easy to read.
    
    Please find below some non-blocking COMMENTs and NITs. An answer will be
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    I hope that this helps to improve the document,
    
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    -éric
    
    == COMMENTS ==
    
    -- Section 1 --
    Does the following assertion always stand ? "This contrasts with the wired
    network setting where traffic flows from all users share the same queue."


[authors] Not always but it's a typical setting for wired networks. We revised the
sentence accordingly:

"This contrasts with a typical wired network setting ... at the bottleneck."
    
    -- Section 3.1.2 --
    As a frequent high speed train passenger, I would have appreciated a simulation
    with mobility of 300 km/h ;-)
    

[authors] Thanks for your interest in testing out a high-speed mobility case :)
For now, the current recommended parameters are limited to simulations that we
have already evaluated. We are open to adding new test parameters in future drafts
_after_ someone has test driven that case in simulations.


    == NITS ==
    
    -- Section 3.1.2 --
    s/10Mhz/10MHz/ ?
    
[authors] Thanks for catching this. Fixed.