Re: [rohc] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5857 (2275)

Robert Stangarone <rstangarone-ietf@whataboutbob.org> Fri, 21 May 2010 13:11 UTC

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Subject: Re: [rohc] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5857 (2275)
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Agreed. Nice catch. I was never the best student in Grammar class. ;)

Bob

On 05/19/2010 12:25 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5857,
> "IKEv2 Extensions to Support Robust Header Compression over IPsec".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5857&eid=2275
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>
> 
> Section: 3.1.2, pg.8
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> [[ first paragraph of description for ROHC_ICV_LEN, on mid-page 8: ]]
> 
>       [...]
>       If no ROHC_ICV_LEN attribute is sent at all or if the ROHC_ICV_LEN
> |     is larger than the length of the ICV of selected algorithm, then
>       the full ICV length as specified by the ROHC_INTEG algorithm MUST
>       be sent.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>       [...]
>       If no ROHC_ICV_LEN attribute is sent at all or if the ROHC_ICV_LEN
> |     is larger than the length of the ICV of the selected algorithm,
>       then the full ICV length as specified by the ROHC_INTEG algorithm
>       MUST be sent.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Rationale: missing definite article
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC5857 (draft-ietf-rohc-ikev2-extensions-hcoipsec-12)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : IKEv2 Extensions to Support Robust Header Compression over IPsec
> Publication Date    : May 2010
> Author(s)           : E. Ertekin, C. Christou, R. Jasani, T. Kivinen, C. Bormann
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Robust Header Compression
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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