Re: Last Call for draft-ietf-rolc-apr-00.txt (1)

[Andrew Smith <[e-mail]>]

Editorial stuff:

1. There's a typo on p3: grep for RFC1597.

2. How should we reference the NHRP work here? Not allowed to reference
internet-drafts.

3. Are RFCs allowed to reference ATM Forum documents? Should probably
reference LANE (ftp://atmforum.com/pub/LANE/af-lane-0021.000)
since it is mentioned in the text.

4. Maybe mention MPOA somehow?


More meaty comments to follow.


Andrew


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> From [e-mail] Fri Oct 20 08:07:57 1995
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> Subject: Last Call for draft-ietf-rolc-apr-00.txt
> Date: Fri, 20 Oct 1995 10:53:54 -0400
> From: "Andrew G. Malis" <[e-mail]>
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> This is a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-rolc-apr-00.txt, for
> the purpose of publishing this I-D as an Informational RFC.  Please
> send comments to the list.
> 
> The Last Call period will last for two weeks (plus a weekend, since
> I'm sending this on Friday), and will end at 23:59:59 PST on Sunday
> 11/5/95.  Due to the clock change, you get an extra hour in the
> process! :-)
> 
> At the conclusion of the period, the comments will be addressed, and
> if necessary, a new revision of the I-D will be produced.  The I-D
> will then be submitted from the WG to the Area Director.
> 
> Regards,
> Andy
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