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Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> Fri, 12 July 2013 06:01 UTC

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Hi,

Thank you very much for this draft,

Just some comments, please correct If I am wrong:

* Due to the doc talk about energy I think should be appropriated define
energy in terminology (section 1.1), in draft-ietf-eman-framework-08 the
energy is defined as: "Energy: That which does work or is capable of doing
work.As used by electric utilities, it is generally a reference to
electrical energy and is measured inkilowatt hours (kWh).Reference:
[IEEE100] NOTES1. Energy is the capacity of a system to produce external
activity or perform work [ISO50001]"

* To a better understanding I think should be appropriated mention into
brackets some energy parameters when energy cost is defined in section
1.1. draft-ietf-eman-energy-monitoring-mib-05 define some parameters in Energy
Table and Energy ParametersTable.

* In section 3.1.1 the field "Energy Cost" in 9 bits I think should be
changed by "E_E " (estimated energy) in 8 bits,

* [RFC6551] is duplicated in Informative References Section

Thanks and Regards,

Ines Robles.

2013/7/11 <roll-request@ietf.org>

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>    1. Fwd: New Version Notification for
>       draft-ajunior-roll-energy-awareness-00.txt
>       (Antonio Carlos de Oliveira Junior)
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> Dear All,
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> We have submitted the draft (draft-ajunior-roll-energy-awareness-00).
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> We are working on implementing the energy-aware metrics on RPL
> implementations such as SimpleRPL, ContikiRPL or TinyRPL.
>
> We appreciate your comments,
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> BR,
> --
> Antonio C. Oliveira Junior, PhD Student Computer Science
> MAP-i Doctoral Programme (www.map.edu.pt/i)
> Researcher at SITILabs (http://siti.ulusofona.pt/)
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