[Roll] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 08 July 2015 02:35 UTC

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Subject: [Roll] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: No Objection

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-- section 2.6, 1st sentence :" A parameter set for an MPL domain SHOULD
NOT be updated more often
   than twice of Information Refresh Time"

The preposition "of" is incorrect. Normally I would say leave that for
the RFC editor, but it's not clear to me if this means "twice the
information refresh time" or "twice during an information refresh time
(interval)". (I assume the former, but it could be more clear.)