Re: [Roll] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10

Charlie Perkins <charles.perkins@earthlink.net> Fri, 23 April 2021 03:56 UTC

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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10
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Hello Meral,

Regarding the following:

On 4/22/2021 5:45 PM, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker wrote:
> Section B1 says "Reclassified [RFC6998] and [RFC7416] as Informational."
> RFC7416 was already Informational. What that a typo?
> This is not part of the final RFC - I was just trying to follow the various
> diffs of the document.
>
>

This just meant to say that a document which was previously listed as a 
Normative Reference was changed to be listed as an Informational 
Reference.  It doesn't affect anything about the actual referenced document.

> Minor issues:
> Other than some issues already reported on the list, the draft is a bit hard to
> follow, Intro could be improved and the terminology was very long, maybe
> presenting terms in category would help.

We will have to look at how this might be improved.  If you think of any 
more specific suggestions please send them also.

Naturally Yours,
Charlie P.