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Re: [Roll] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Yusuke DOI <yusuke.doi@toshiba.co.jp> Wed, 08 July 2015 23:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Alvaro,


On 2015-07-09 7:04, Alvaro Retana (aretana) wrote:
> Yes..I can see how this is confusing, and I think the fix is easy: remove
> the second sentence.  This second sentence doesn¹t add new information and
> it makes the text confusing by adding the ³MAY².
>
> I¹ll let Yusuke confirm that this is ok (and address your other comment).

I agree with the fix. Thank you for suggestion.

Yusuke

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